Partial first draft of my music video

This is my first draft for my music video with gaps as I haven't finished filming as yet. I plan to change some things as it doesn't quite work with the music. These include:

• re-shooting the scenes in the bedroom to a different location
• re-shooting the extreme close up of the lips as they are blurry

Along with this I now need to shoot the rest of my footage and edit it to create a second draft before completing my final draft. This will have to be shot in January. If it snows then I could use this weather change to film some shots outside.