Audience Feedback for Second Draft of Music Video

Audience Feedback on Second Draft of Music Video by s0013189 on GoAnimate

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Full Second Draft

This is my second draft of my music video. From the first draft to this second draft I have changed the location of the artists performance from inside to outside after receiving audience feedback about the location. I also decided the put the narrative that was in the first draft into black and white as  this would reflect the past memories she is reliving in the song.The next thing I need to do is to replace the shot of the love heart as I don't think this shot first with the whole of the video and to replace the rain shots at the beginning.

Befunky.com

With all the images on the inside cover of my digipak, I used a website called www.befunky.com in which I uploaded the images and added certain effects to them in order to create the images that are featured above.

I used this website to create the image on my front cover. 

The way I achieved the effects on these images and the image for the front cover is as follows:

Fifth Draft of Digipak

This digipak now includes the new version of the front cover after receiving feedback on the image of the previous front cover.

Changes to CD Cover

After receiving feedback about the image of the previous front cover being the wrong contrast, I decided to change the contrast and make the image become more black rather than have a yellowish tinge.

Third and Fourth Drafts of Digipak

With this draft I decided to add writing to the CD's so they didn't look plain and people could tell which digipak they came from.

After receiving feedback on the previous draft they pointed out that it would be better if the 'Lola Mae' and 'Lights' were on the opposite CD's as the second disc would be the first disc that the audience will see when they open the digipak and so the audience will want to know the artist first and the album title second.

Second Draft of Digipak

After receiving feedback for my first draft of the digipak, I have learned that i needed a digipak with two CD's and so had to change the design inside the digipak to fit with this. I have taken out the picture of the feet and replaced it with a CD. I decided to keep the collage of the images of Ellie as it shows the fun side of the artist and also the lights as it coincides with the album title.

Change in Layout of Digipak

After my first draft of my digipak I have decided to change the layout of my digipak to two CD's rather than one.